Continued from the previous chapter:[Notes] Peter Rabbit’s Character Design and Development (Part 1)
Peter Rabbit gradually grew up in the story
The huge success of “The Tale of Peter Rabbit” after its publication forced Miss Porter to consider continuing the story of Peter Rabbit (or continuing a little bit in subsequent stories).
The necessity comes from three aspects: the urgent demand of the publishing house. Regardless of whether the creation is successful or not, the sequel will at least sell well; the needs of readers — “What happened to Peter Rabbit later?”; Miss Porter’s own needs, including both economic aspects (royalties) and inner exploration — a mirror of Peter Rabbit’s growth as a creator.
Creation is largely a process of self-discovery. When Miss Porter first wrote about the bunny in a letter, she must have had a specific idea in mind. She developed the letter into a book in 1901, printing and selling it at her own expense, and finally publishing it commercially in 1902. There was a reason for this.
Simply put, Miss Porter at the time yearned for independence—both spiritual and financial. Her parents, who were wealthy and upper-middle-class, preferred a life “like the aristocracy,” which meant no work, focusing their energy on leisure and socializing in high society. For example, painting was fine, a tasteful pastime, but making a living from it was not, as it was a low-status lifestyle. Since the 1890s, Miss Porter had been trying to earn some extra income by selling her paintings (for greeting cards and book illustrations), a rebellious act in her family. She collaborated with her brother Bertram on these endeavors. Similarly, publishing books to earn royalties was even more rebellious. Later, she even considered marrying the bookseller and editor Norman Vaughan. Her parents considered this a completely inappropriate marriage, as booksellers earned their livings through business and work, which they considered unrespectable. In fact, Miss Porter’s grandfather and grandfather-in-law were originally farmers. Later, they worked hard to earn a huge fortune through industry and business. But when it came to Miss Porter’s parents, business and work became not respectable, which is ironic in itself.
The success of Peter Rabbit was therefore of great significance to Miss Porter’s development. With the success of this and subsequent books, she finally had enough money to her name, allowing her to purchase a farm (Knolltop Farm) in her beloved Lake District in northern England in 1905. Originally intended as a holiday farm after her marriage to Norman Vaughan, it later became a temporary refuge when she frequently escaped from her family in London. Even after her marriage to Mr. William Hillis in 1913, Knolltop Farm remained her personal estate, a private chapel of her spiritual independence.
Sketch of Hilltop Farm (by Miss Porter, 1905)
Miss Porter in front of the farmhouse at Hilltop Farm
In fact, from the perspective of her personal creative pleasure, she had no intention of writing (drawing) the story of Peter Rabbit again, but she really needed money at the time. More money meant more possibilities for independence for her.
The year after The Tale of Peter Rabbit, she published The Tailor of Gloucester and The Tale of the Squirrel and the Fruit. These three books were all her own creations, genuinely written for a specific audience of children, with a natural and engaging story. The Tailor was a personal favorite of hers, for many reasons I won’t discuss here. Then, in 1904, she finally published a Peter Rabbit-related story: The Tale of Little Benjamin Rabbit. This was a specially adapted story, and the illustrations were just as good as The Tale of Peter Rabbit, but it still had some traces of “compositional writing.”
Miss Porter never explicitly explains the relationship between Little Benjamin and Peter Rabbit. There are two possibilities: Little Benjamin’s mother and Peter’s mother are sisters, or Little Benjamin’s father (Old Benjamin) and Peter’s mother are siblings. In either case, they are cousins.
Benjamin and Flopsy with their little bunny in “The Story of the Flopsy Bunny”
But who’s older? Both are possible. I’m leaning towards Little Benjamin Rabbit being the older one for several reasons: First, Benjamin and Peter are actually the names of two rabbits Miss Porter once owned. Benjamin was the first, Peter the second. So, in terms of order of birth, Benjamin is the older one. Second, Little Benjamin Rabbit later married Peter’s sister, Flopsy. This makes him most likely Peter’s eldest sister, as the story begins by saying the four little rabbits are “Flopsy, Mopsy, Cotton-Tail, and Peter.” According to common practice, the oldest one is always mentioned first. Third, in “The Tale of the Flopsy Bunnies” and “The Tale of Mr. Todd,” Little Benjamin Rabbit and Flopsy have a large family, while Peter remains a happily single man. Therefore, it’s more reasonable to assume that Little Benjamin Rabbit is Peter’s cousin.
A sketch of Miss Potter’s pet rabbit, Peter
However, in the recent Peter Rabbit cartoon series, in order to highlight Peter Rabbit’s strong character, little Benjamin Rabbit is simply weak. Naturally, the Chinese version of the cartoon also translated little Benjamin Rabbit into a cousin, which I think is understandable. This is related to the character setting of the cartoon director.
In “The Tale of Little Benjamin Rabbit,” when little Benjamin first appears, he’s even more clueless than Peter Rabbit. Noticing Mr. and Mrs. McGonagall are out, he goes to get Peter Rabbit to play in Mr. McGonagall’s garden. Peter Rabbit in this episode is a complete reversal. First, he sits in a corner, wrapped in a red cotton handkerchief, looking miserable. Only to be dragged back to the garden by Benjamin, where he’s so terrified that he falls headfirst while climbing down a tree. Just imagine how miserable he is!
The scene where Peter Rabbit retrieves his blue jacket and shoes from the Scarecrow is quite amusing. He explains that it rained the day before, and it seems the jacket has shrunk. Actually, the jacket was already tight enough in the previous episode, and this scene is probably a symbol of Peter’s growth. Even after finding his clothes and shoes, Peter Rabbit still isn’t happy. He keeps his ears perked up—he’s become a very cautious little rabbit!
In contrast, little Benjamin Rabbit is quite the scoundrel. He even packs onions in a cotton handkerchief to please Peter’s mother. This detail contains a fascinating irony: onions are a common ingredient in any British rabbit dish, whether it’s rabbit pie or roast rabbit—and yet these two little rabbits are bringing onions home! In “The Tale of Peter Rabbit,” when Peter sees the gate in the hedge from afar, Mr. McGonagall is also “digging onions with a hoe”! Miss Potter uses the “rabbit + onion” combination twice in a row. Later, in “The Tale of Jemima Puddle Duck,” the fox asks Jemima to collect some garnish for the roast duck, a common tactic of hers.
The worst part of this episode is that the cat (the one staring at the goldfish in the previous episode) shows up and traps the two little rabbits under a basket with a bunch of onions. The cat sits on top of the basket, watching as Mr. McGonagall is about to come home (dinner and its sides are automatically prepared)! Of course, the two little rabbits are finally rescued by old Benjamin Rabbit, but he also gets a good spanking. Peter Rabbit finally returns home, forgiven by his mother, and folds handkerchiefs with his sisters, looking like a well-behaved little rabbit who’s learned a lesson.
Peter Rabbit in “The Tale of Little Benjamin Rabbit” isn’t exactly a cameo, but he’s definitely a supporting character, serving as a foil to another, even more reckless daredevil. However, it can also be said that by this stage, Peter Rabbit has passed his full rebellious phase, becoming more practical and cautious in his life, aware of the very real dangers of risk-taking and rebellion. Peter Rabbit in this book isn’t exactly lovable, but he’s still believable. Miss Potter also possesses a rather ambiguous duality when it comes to rebellion: she longs for it, but she’s also well aware of the risks involved (for example, her brother Bertram later loses his inheritance after marrying a bartender’s daughter).
Later, aside from a brief appearance in “The Tale of Mrs. Titthorne Winthorn,” Peter Rabbit didn’t make his official debut until 1909, in “The Tale of Foster Rabbit,” where he made a two-page appearance. However, this appearance was definitely a minor one. However, two interesting details were revealed: Peter Rabbit remained single and unmarried; and second, he was cultivating his own vegetable garden, a partnership with his mother! The thought of Peter Rabbit becoming a “good citizen” might be a bit disappointing, right?
In this book, little Benjamin Rabbit and his wife Flopsy raised a bunch of baby rabbits. They lived a happy life of “not caring about tomorrow after today”. They never had enough food, and often had to borrow some cabbages from Peter Rabbit, but “sometimes, even Peter Rabbit had no extra cabbages to share with them” — the funniest thing about this page was that Peter Rabbit spread his hands in front, meaning that he had no more, but in the back, Peter Rabbit’s mother deliberately held up her skirt to hide the cabbages behind her!
In this story, little Benjamin Rabbit has become a father. He no longer leads his brood of bunnies in Mr. Mag’s vegetable garden. Instead, he picks discarded old vegetable leaves from the garbage dump outside—a rather difficult task, one might imagine. However, remember that Miss Potter had been a farmer since 1905, cultivating her own gardens and vegetables, and the wild rabbits stealing her vegetables would likely have been unwelcome. Perhaps because of this, the rabbits in her stories became increasingly cautious and “civilized.” Or perhaps, by this point, she no longer needed to be so rebellious.
(To be continued, next link)
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