[Reprint] Our First Picture Book

The first batch of pic­ture books cre­at­ed by the chil­dren of Han­miao Stu­dio!Orig­i­nal address:Our first pic­ture bookauthor:Han and Miao[转载]我们的第一本图画书
The teach­ers Bird, Bear, and Rab­bit who made the pic­ture books, as well as sis­ters Zijia and Xiaox­i­an, have been tutor­ing the Han Miao chil­dren for some time. The chil­dren have accu­mu­lat­ed a cer­tain amount of intu­itive under­stand­ing of pic­ture books, so we should try to make a pic­ture book our­selves.
In this class, Teacher Dax­iong fold­ed two pieces of paper in half and sta­pled them togeth­er in the mid­dle to cre­ate a pro­to­type book with a front cov­er, a back cov­er, and four pages of text. He then asked the chil­dren to draw a sto­ry. A sto­ry has a begin­ning, a mid­dle, and an end. Each page should pave the way for the next page, and the sur­pris­es when turn­ing the pages run through the whole process. As for the sub­ject mat­ter, Teacher Bird still hopes that every­one can give full play to their imag­i­na­tion with­out any con­straints. He only made one request: “four legs, two legs, no legs.” This means that the char­ac­ters in the pic­ture book should haveFour-legged(horse, cow, sheep, ele­phant, giraffe, zebra, lizard, croc­o­dile, etc.),Two-legged(chick­ens, ducks, cranes, pen­guins and oth­er birds, bipedal dinosaurs, and your­self, because humans are also two-legged ani­mals),With­out legs(Snakes, earth­worms, snails and all fish) — Of course, this is just an inspi­ra­tion. When chil­dren are not yet able to make up sto­ries inde­pen­dent­ly, it is nec­es­sary to give them some hints. It is okay not to fol­low this, as long as the final effect is achieved.
Draw­ing pic­ture books isn’t easy. Teach­ers, work­ing in this field, under­stand the chal­lenges involved. Yet, the young­sters’ per­for­mance once again amazed the adults. Many inter­est­ing, well-orga­nized books were cre­at­ed. Every­one gath­ered around to share their own sto­ries, mak­ing every­one laugh. It was a tru­ly won­der­ful feel­ing. Hon­est­ly, Bird Hero was quite moved by every­one’s hard work, cre­at­ing our first pic­ture book.
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Wow, there are so many legs in the stu­dio today. Teacher Bird, what are you doing?
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Look, what legs are these!
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What’s the deal with four legs? Who can tell me?
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What about two legs? Tell me!
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What are the things with­out legs? Well, let’s think about it…
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Teacher Bird’s expres­sion is scary.
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He is actu­al­ly quite fun­ny.
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Let’s draw a book with crayons.
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Because it is a pic­ture book, the feel­ing of turn­ing the pages is very impor­tant.
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Teacher Bird sug­gest­ed that Yi Yi enrich the pic­ture.
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Teacher Dax­iong helped the chil­dren record sto­ries with a very seri­ous expres­sion.
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It turns out that the paint­ing is about the col­or fam­i­ly!
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This is the ugly duck­ling brought by Congcong’s par­ents. It’s a lit­tle timid, but actu­al­ly very cute.
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The chil­dren in the after­noon are old­er, so they do the book-bind­ing work them­selves.
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The ele­phant is watch­ing.
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Big Bear is guid­ing.
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Final­ly, a book order­ing expert has to come.
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We con­tin­ue to talk about four legs, two legs and no legs. Child No. 98 is catch­ing a mouse on the black­board.
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Xue Rong thought about it, what kind of sto­ry should he make up?
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Lit­tle Maodou caught the mouse on the black­board and put it on the paper.
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The two broth­ers dis­cussed it togeth­er.
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Xiaoyin pon­dered for a moment, then calm­ly, res­olute­ly and coura­geous­ly began to paint.
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These two broth­ers also need to dis­cuss this.
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Maodou’s work on the black­board is quite impres­sive, and his pic­ture book is actu­al­ly very relat­ed to his black­board draw­ings. On the black­board, the mouse is def­i­nite­ly at a dis­ad­van­tage, but in the pic­ture book, the mouse ulti­mate­ly tri­umphs. With­in the same time and space, a child’s think­ing is con­tin­u­ous, regard­less of the medi­um used.
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I will leave my baby in the care of Teacher Yang Tuer, and I can rest assured.
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I qui­et­ly looked at Xiaoy­in’s progress, and Xiaoy­in’s lit­tle mon­key qui­et­ly glanced at me.
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Oh yeah, we’re almost done, every­one.
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Add a few more details.
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Xiaoyin has start­ed draw­ing her sec­ond pic­ture book.
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Now that every­one has fin­ished draw­ing, why not play a lit­tle game? Big Bear orga­nizes the chil­dren to draw… What to draw… Draw­ing toi­let paper!
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It was real­ly fun, a long scroll was cre­at­ed.
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Such a pleas­ant day ends like this!
 
 
Our first pic­ture book
(Note: The chil­dren took all their books home, so I will briefly dis­play them here. Some chil­dren drew two books, and I will focus on the one that worked best. Order: Ran­dom)

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Col­or Finds Friends by Miao­miao
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Pur­ple and yel­low are good friends.
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Yel­low said, “Let me ask my friends to come and play!”
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Yel­low’s friend is orange.
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Pur­ple said: “I have friends too!” Pur­ple’s friend is Blue.
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Blue also calls its friend, which is green.
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Orange’s friend is pink, and every­one is a good friend.
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Miao­miao made a col­or­ing book. Even though it was just col­or­ing blocks, you could still see the flow of thoughts and the sto­ry was very inter­est­ing.

    I hope Miao­miao will be bold­er and try more spe­cif­ic images.
 
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The Lit­tle Chick­en and the Big Coconut by Li Jiashun (Shun­shun)
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(The brown thing next to the chick is a fall­en coconut.)
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(Note: There are clouds in the sky, mak­ing it less sun­ny. The chick­en is very hap­py.)
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(The blue one rep­re­sents the big “Ah–”)
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Back cov­er. Shun­shun said that these lumps are all coconut poop left by the chick­ens after they have eat­en their fill.
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Shun Shun’s book is sim­ple, with a clear sto­ry­line, and he knows how to use the back cov­er to extend the plot, which is very good.

    The col­ors of the coconut trees in the last few pic­tures are a bit messy, which is caused by too much rep­e­ti­tion. Next time, try chang­ing the com­po­si­tion. A fresh feel­ing can bring a lot.

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Three Green Eggs by Yi Yi[转载]我们的第一本图画书

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Yiyi is a girl who is still in the graf­fi­ti stage, but she already has a good sense of col­or and shows signs of orga­niz­ing sto­ries.

    There are three green eggs in the first pic­ture, pink clouds float in to play games in the sec­ond pic­ture, and more col­ors are added in the third pic­ture. The lines on the back cov­er are also full of joy.
    There is a car­ni­val of col­ors in Yi Yi’s mind.
 
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The Chick­en Goes to Town by Gege
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(The princess empha­sized that this is not a cat, but a lion. The chicks and eggs are in the lion’s stom­ach, you can’t see them, but the princess and the lit­tle prince know both.)
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(The green ones are coconuts, they fall down.)
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The back cov­er is also signed.
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In chil­dren’s minds, being eat­en is just the door to anoth­er world.

    Each of Gege’s paint­ings is both inter­con­nect­ed and self-con­tained. In the sec­ond, the egg trans­forms into a chick, cre­at­ing its own world. This can be inter­pret­ed as the lion in the first paint­ing hav­ing a world and sky inside its bel­ly, com­plete with coconut trees. The chick is hap­py, and the lion is no longer a con­cern. The eagle in the third paint­ing is inspired by the chick, and in the fourth, the mind is even more free-spir­it­ed, free from restraint.
    Inter­est­ing­ly, the third and fourth paint­ings pay spe­cial atten­tion to the cos­tumes and depict them in detail, which is a stage unique to girls.

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The Lit­tle Chick­en Eats a Big Pear by Cong Cong
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(There is a pro­logue before the first page, which is about a pear and an egg with a chick inside.)
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(The main text begins. On the right is a chick. Her draw­ing of a “chick­en trans­formed from an egg” shows that the egg has two legs. It’s very inter­est­ing.)
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The back cov­er is blank.
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The last page has so much to offer, and it’s so much fun. The lit­tle chick­en, hav­ing grown up after eat­ing, changes into this and that, but in the end, it’s still a lit­tle chick­en. The lit­tle chick­en is the best.

   
Dur­ing her graf­fi­ti phase, Con­g­con­g’s heart is filled with sto­ries. Don’t over­look her dots and lines; they all hold mean­ing. Bird loves Con­g­con­g’s bold, unre­strained draw­ings, max­i­miz­ing the size of the paper, so that her human touch can be ful­ly expressed.

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Ani­mals Look­ing for the Ball by Xiao Di
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(The blue on the far left is the sea, with a fish swim­ming in it. Besides the salt­ed duck eggs hid­den by the ele­phant, there are also water­mel­ons and col­ored balls in the grass. The ele­phant pre­tends not to know.)
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(Those brown lines are earth­worms, lots of tiny ones. There are also lit­tle snakes and snails. The one crawl­ing on the low­er right is a lit­tle snake, and the snail at the top is hid­den in its shell. Xiaodi’s mom said Xiao­di has been par­tic­u­lar­ly inter­est­ed in rain­bows late­ly, so she drew a rain­bow ball and a rain­bow wall.)
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Xiaodi’s col­or fam­i­ly. The bird thought of the Trans­former Bean fam­i­ly, Bar­ba­pa­pa, Bar­ba­ma­ma, Bar­ba Bruno, Bar­ba…
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The back cov­er is gor­geous.
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Xiaodi’s pic­ture books may seem inco­her­ent, but they have their own inter­nal log­ic.

   
The ele­phant goes to the grass to look for the ball, but what he is actu­al­ly look­ing for is not the ball, but many inter­est­ing things that can be found through this thread.

   
Xiaodi’s self-titled book, “Ani­mal Finds the Ball,” sug­gests that ele­phants aren’t the only ones involved in this game. The grass is filled with trea­sures, and the col­ors are filled with fam­i­ly affec­tion, all of which Xiao­di finds one by one. The finale is a feast of col­ors, a hap­py end­ing.

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I’m Afraid of It by NONO
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horse
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Hors­es are afraid of dinosaurs.
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Dinosaurs are afraid of ghosts, and ghosts are afraid of the sun.
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What a pow­er­ful sun!
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Con­ti­nu­ity is a strength of NONO’s, and he’s adept at using media to extend the plot. The horse’s head in one pan­el tran­si­tions to the next, cre­at­ing a nat­ur­al flow as the read­er reads the pages. His cov­ers are metic­u­lous­ly designed, nev­er slop­pi­ly exe­cut­ed. This cap­tures the joy of pic­ture books.

   
NONO also drew a sequel “I’m Not Afraid of It” on the same day, con­tin­u­ing to extend this theme.


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The Banana Thief by Lin Xiaoyin
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back cov­er.
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A well-designed front and back cov­er adds so much col­or to a pic­ture book, as you can see from Xiao Yin’s work. Note the design of the char­ac­ter “蕉” (banana) on the cov­er, and the black text of “大盗” (thief)—it’s the same col­or as the zebra.

   
Com­po­si­tion is one of Xiaoy­in’s strengths. She’s metic­u­lous about posi­tion­ing char­ac­ters, whether left or right, top or bot­tom, which cre­ates a visu­al­ly pleas­ing effect as you turn the pages. I like the com­po­si­tion in step 5, where the zebra, mon­key, and banana all stand out, empha­siz­ing the explo­sive lan­guage and cre­at­ing a very effec­tive effect. How­ev­er, the text is too weak in pen­cil; I should have stuck with crayons, as always.

   
The zebra on the back cov­er shows the face of a masked thief, and the black and white stripes on its body look like a pris­on­er’s clothes, which makes peo­ple laugh.


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Seal and the Sun Make Friends by Zhou Fang­shen­ping (Baobao)
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A care­ful look at the baby’s “Seal Makes Friends with the Sun” is a delight­ful expe­ri­ence, both visu­al­ly and spir­i­tu­al­ly. The seal in the ocean, sur­round­ed by small ani­mals, imme­di­ate­ly reveals its car­ing and kind nature. It knows what to give its new friend as a gift, but what? Sun­glass­es make a won­der­ful prop. What bet­ter gift could there be for the sun?

   
The sun on the back cov­er is wear­ing sun­glass­es, a gift from a seal friend. He looks so hap­py and proud, while the sea beneath him is calm. This is the joy of shar­ing and a tes­ti­mo­ny to friend­ship.

   
My moth­er has been read­ing pic­ture books to my baby since he was very young. He is a pic­ture book child, show­ing a strong aes­thet­ic sense and atten­tion to detail. Notice how the blue seal is always accom­pa­nied by a small blue fish – anoth­er friend, anoth­er friend­ship, anoth­er sto­ry. It speaks vol­umes.

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The Lit­tle Girl and the Lit­tle House by Xue Rong
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Every­one burst into laugh­ter when we shared the sto­ry of Xue Rong. A lit­tle girl encoun­tered a large python in the for­est, but it scared it away. Then, the lit­tle girl went home and ate her meal, com­plete­ly calm and com­posed. She tru­ly nailed being a lit­tle girl!

   
Xue Rong has a very good sense of col­or. He paint­ed the for­est in autumn with rich col­ors. The lit­tle girl’s house is more beau­ti­ful, and the lit­tle girl keeps chang­ing her skirts.

   
In the first pic­ture, the sun is gloomy, with men­ac­ing clouds lurk­ing behind it. That’s because it was in a bad mood that morn­ing. In the sec­ond pic­ture, it’s brighter. The lit­tle girl’s mood bright­ens after meet­ing the pup­py, and she can now go into the for­est and scare the python. What a won­der­ful day!

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Learn­ing For­eign Lan­guages by Zhang Tianyi (Xizi)
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A good pic­ture book is def­i­nite­ly read­able, and it’s also high­ly effec­tive when read live. Xiz­i’s “Learn­ing a For­eign Lan­guage” was a hilar­i­ous read, and it was tru­ly cap­ti­vat­ing. For a near­ly word­less pic­ture book to achieve this, it requires a tru­ly cap­ti­vat­ing set­ting, and Xizi nailed it.

   
The first image shows a cat hid­ing behind a tree, grin­ning mis­chie­vous­ly, clear­ly intent on mis­chief. A large rat and a small mouse approach, sweat­ing pro­fuse­ly in the scorch­ing heat. The cat sud­den­ly leaps out, fright­en­ing the mouse, who near­ly leaps into the sun. Then, unex­pect­ed­ly, the large rat utters a for­eign lan­guage: “Woof woof woof!” The cat, star­tled, flees. Ha! Learn­ing a for­eign lan­guage can be so effec­tive! The small mouse on the back cov­er is indeed seri­ous­ly study­ing a for­eign lan­guage.

   
Xiz­i’s pic­ture book has the “punch-box­ing” tech­niques of crosstalk, and the sto­ry set­ting is very excit­ing.

   
Xizi is quite good at mak­ing up sto­ries. He also drew “Anti­mat­ter Zoo,” which depicts the awk­ward­ness of humans and ani­mals being in oppo­site sit­u­a­tions. Unfor­tu­nate­ly, the sub­ject was too broad, so I did­n’t fin­ish it. I’ll con­tin­ue lat­er. Good sub­jects nev­er go unno­ticed.

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Tom and Jer­ry, author: Liu Hem­ing (Maodou)
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A cat chas­es a mouse, and the mouse tries to escape—it’s a fair­ly com­mon set­ting, but Edamame has added a lot of inter­est­ing touch­es. The cat and mouse are like two boys fight­ing, with the one being pressed down strug­gling and final­ly squeez­ing out from behind the cat. I’m sure this is a famil­iar “com­bat expe­ri­ence” for many lit­tle boys.

   
The mouse escapes and looks back, nat­u­ral­ly tran­si­tion­ing to the next paint­ing: a large snake arrives, scar­ing the cat away… But did the cat real­ly escape? Read­ers, don’t let the author fool you. On the back cov­er, Maodou play­ful­ly depicts the snake, bloat­ed by a full cat. It turns out the cat did­n’t escape at all, and the mouse did­n’t leave either. Instead, it returns, grin­ning.

   
This is such an inter­est­ing pic­ture book. The author, Maodou, turned 7 on his birth­day. No won­der he wrote a 6 on the cov­er (he’d been doing it for a year), then imme­di­ate­ly slapped his head and said, “Wrong!” and changed it to a 7. He looks like he’s 70 years old.

   
Hap­py birth­day to Edamame!